ntroduction Paragraph 5/5Thesis statement 2/4Topic Sentences (3) 9/10Evidence/quote selection 10/15Tone, diction, syntax, vocabulary,transitions8/10Grammar/Sentence Structure 9/10Analysis supporting thesis & answering analysis questions28/40Conclusion paragraph 6/6Deductions: -5 no Works Cited pageFinal Grade: 72%. This is for extra credit my grade was 72% . The weakness area was Analysis supporting thesis answeir analyis questions score 28/40. attach below is my essay that need extra credit.
I am writing a personal narrative final draft paper: From my rough draft (Attached below), Instructions is 3-4 pages and double spacedincludes a heading and page numbersincludes a thoughtful and i
I am writing a personal narrative final draft paper: From my rough draft (Attached below), Instructions is 3-4 pages and double spaced includes a heading and page numbers includes a thoughtful and interesting title uses the storytelling tools (Attached) Comments I got: I thought this was a meaningful personal narrative. The strongest part is the relationship