ntroduction Paragraph 5/5Thesis statement 2/4Topic Sentences (3) 9/10Evidence/quote selection 10/15Tone, diction, syntax, vocabulary,transitions8/10Grammar/Sentence Structure 9/10Analysis supporting thesis & answering analysis questions28/40Conclusion paragraph 6/6Deductions: -5 no Works Cited pageFinal Grade: 72%. This is for extra credit my grade was 72% . The weakness area was Analysis supporting thesis answeir analyis questions score 28/40. attach below is my essay that need extra credit.
Instructions: 1. Read the paragraph below. It’s poorly written, unclear, and all over the place. 2. Rewrite the paragraph to make it clear, professional, and polished. 3. Write 2–3 sentences explainin
Instructions: 1. Read the paragraph below. It’s poorly written, unclear, and all over the place. 2. Rewrite the paragraph to make it clear, professional, and polished. 3. Write 2–3 sentences explaining what changes you made and why. 4. Submit your revised paragraph and your explanation here. Original Paragraph (the mess!):