ntroduction Paragraph 5/5Thesis statement 2/4Topic Sentences (3) 9/10Evidence/quote selection 10/15Tone, diction, syntax, vocabulary,transitions8/10Grammar/Sentence Structure 9/10Analysis supporting thesis & answering analysis questions28/40Conclusion paragraph 6/6Deductions: -5 no Works Cited pageFinal Grade: 72%. This is for extra credit my grade was 72% . The weakness area was Analysis supporting thesis answeir analyis questions score 28/40. attach below is my essay that need extra credit.
Your Favorite Vacation Reflect on your favorite vacation. Share the following about your trip. If you haven’t traveled, choose a place you would like to visit, and share how you would plan your trip.
Your Favorite Vacation Reflect on your favorite vacation. Share the following about your trip. If you haven’t traveled, choose a place you would like to visit, and share how you would plan your trip. City/country you visited How did you travel Types of tourism by activity What your accommodations were