What to do:
- Revise the first draft based on feedback from peer reviews & TA/me. Specify your revision with a different font color or yellow highlight to notify the instructor of your changes. It’s up to you whether to accept or not the comments based on the grading rubric. Use others’ feedback only to improve your paper. However, be sure to address at least what the instructor asks students to do after RP5 grading.
Work on the Result section 3.3
- Summarize a study including OR/RR/HR and 95% CI interpretations.
- Interpretations in your own words (see a template or a sample paper for more details).
- Each paragraph for each study.
Work on the Discussion section:
- Summarize the main research findings by answering the question, “How strong is the risk factor associated with chronic disease?” and discuss the clinical and public health implications in one paragraph.
- If you found conflicting results from 4 studies, include potential reasons for this in another paragraph.
Comments from peer
INTRODUCTION 1.2. Disease Distribution Focus on only one of disease frequency from incidence, prevalence, hospitalization, or mortality, etc. 1 illustration can explain multiple factors.
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INTRODUCTION 1.3 Risk Factor When DOH did not provide any data for the listed risk factors, smoking, obesity can be chosen after discussion.
Try to relate your reasoning for picking oral contraceptives to the data from the Florida health charts
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Focus on RP7
