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For this assignment, you need a clear, debatable claim that asks a specific audience to take action – not a general discussion of a concept.
Please revise your topic so that it answers: Who should do what differently, and why?
Your revised topic should be a concise statement, not a full essay or research summary. For example, you might focus on policies, behaviors, or institutional practices related to scheduling flexibility.
Please resubmit a revised topic statement in your own words.