I need help with redoing this assignment. I have attached the assignment itself and along the brainstorming that was to support the assignment. My instructor feedback “Your topic and title don’t mesh together. You should have more references Your hook does not connect with your essay title. Your mapped thesis doesn’t follow your introduction. This paper does not have a focus to it. I also have attached a blank assignment sheet
My team is the Dallas Cowboys, I am trying to entice the Mayor and council, to bring my team to their city, which is Miami. I am the vice president of finance for a consulting firm that has b
My team is the Dallas Cowboys, I am trying to entice the Mayor and council, to bring my team to their city, which is Miami. I am the vice president of finance for a consulting firm that has been hired by the mayor and city council