Can you revise my rhetorical essay I need the url in the cites too
Instructions: 1. Read the paragraph below. It’s poorly written, unclear, and all over the place. 2. Rewrite the paragraph to make it clear, professional, and polished. 3. Write 2–3 sentences explainin
Instructions: 1. Read the paragraph below. It’s poorly written, unclear, and all over the place. 2. Rewrite the paragraph to make it clear, professional, and polished. 3. Write 2–3 sentences explaining what changes you made and why. 4. Submit your revised paragraph and your explanation here. Original Paragraph (the mess!):