Mandatory final draft of the rhetorical analysis (this was the rough draft). Can you please turn in a new paper that builds on the old one? This teacher is giving me hell with this assignment. Just do the best you can.
Instructions
Turn in a revised and edited version of the rhetorical analysis. For revision,
1) think about appeals (ethos, pathos, and logos) and your responses to them as we are discussing in class this week
2) break thoughts into unified and coherent paragraphs, connecting them with transitions, as we are also discussing this week
Edit for all of the grammar that we’ve discussed (sentence-level construction, modifiers, and pronouns)
I’ll grade 45% for the three body paragraphs, for unity and coherence as is related to the appeals and response to them.
I’ll grade 25% for the intro and conclusion (standard form).
I’ll grade 30% for editing as above.
I’ll take a 40% penalty for work that shows little to no substantive revision.