Choose one of the rough draft emails below that business people have sent to their bosses or coworkers. Revise and edit each draft referring to the Revisions list. Turn in your revision and the final, reader-ready copy. As you revise, keep in mind that you may have to delete and add information, rearrange the order of information, and make the tone suitable for your readers. As you edit, make sure your sentences are clear and concise.
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One assignment need asap. In the day and age of technology and social media, there has been mass exposure to information about mental health. Advantages to this include increased awareness and reduced stigma. Disadvantages to this include misinformation, bias, and over-pathologizing typical behaviors. You will likely interact with people who