Here is the feedback for this assignment that needs to be redone.
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All, you’ll find feedback under the draft assignment. Take a look and let me know if you have questions. If you did not complete a draft, please do so asap and DO NOT wait for feedback. Rather, use the revision assignments for the week. I am noticing some common problems:
· people are referring to the appeals in a general way, without exploring THEIR own reactions and how these lead to a decision of support or not
· people are not focusing on evidence (grounds) so that they can then interpret in a focused way
· things are not in a coherent order and are missing transitions
· paragraphs are not being LED with your overall decision making process
Review the prewriting and planning assignments to remind yourself of the goal.
Review assignment description and pre-writing and planning assignments:
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this is not a personal response yet
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you are not telling us whether you will support Nike or not on basis of the three appeals
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you are not sorting the appeal-driven paragraphs to show overall decision
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review claim grounds warrant structyre in the planning assignment and rememer to lead with and then prove YOUR decision
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this is too general and not as required. do not look up things but show me how YOU are thininking. don’t refer to a general audience.