I need an outline and final draft for an evaluation essay. I will attach details of the instructions along with what to write about.
Instructions: 1. Read the paragraph below. It’s poorly written, unclear, and all over the place. 2. Rewrite the paragraph to make it clear, professional, and polished. 3. Write 2–3 sentences explainin
Instructions: 1. Read the paragraph below. It’s poorly written, unclear, and all over the place. 2. Rewrite the paragraph to make it clear, professional, and polished. 3. Write 2–3 sentences explaining what changes you made and why. 4. Submit your revised paragraph and your explanation here. Original Paragraph (the mess!):