ntroduction Paragraph 5/5Thesis statement 2/4Topic Sentences (3) 9/10Evidence/quote selection 10/15Tone, diction, syntax, vocabulary,transitions8/10Grammar/Sentence Structure 9/10Analysis supporting thesis & answering analysis questions28/40Conclusion paragraph 6/6Deductions: -5 no Works Cited pageFinal Grade: 72%. This is for extra credit my grade was 72% . The weakness area was Analysis supporting thesis answeir analyis questions score 28/40. attach below is my essay that need extra credit.
What is one thing you want to know about your teacher?What is your biggest dream or goal in life?What is the nicest thing a classmate has said to you?
What is one thing you want to know about your teacher? What is your biggest dream or goal in life? What is the nicest thing a classmate has said to you?