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Content & Organization

☐ My introduction includes an academic hook, sufficient background information, and a one-sentence

thesis statement at the end.

☐ My thesis statement makes an argument, chooses a side, and is specific enough.

☐ My topic sentences all clearly introduce a new subtopic supporting my thesis, and none of my

subtopics overlap with one another.

☐ Starting with the second topic sentence, my topic sentences include sophisticated transitions.

☐ Each body paragraph contains sufficient supporting evidence that backs up my topic sentence.

☐ The supporting evidence in my body paragraphs does not rely on assumptions, generalizations,

personal anecdotes, or faulty logic.

☐ My conclusion restates my thesis in a new way, and leaves my reader with a sense of the significance

of my argument.

Research

☐ I use the minimum required number of sources in my paper.

☐ Some of my references are academic, peer-reviewed articles from scholarly journals (the library

databases).

☐ My website references are only from .org, .gov, or .edu URLs.

☐ I use more than one source per body paragraph.

☐ I use the “quote sandwich” formula for all of my quotes and paraphrases.

☐ I do more paraphrasing than quoting.

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Style

☐ My paper includes no personal pronouns – I, me, my, mine, you, your, yours, we, us, our, ours.

☐ My paper includes no contractions – don’t, can’t, won’t, haven’t, etc.

☐ My paper includes no vague or cliché words or phrases such as: a lot, huge, good, more and more, as a

matter of fact, all in all, at the end of the day, this day and age, etc.

☐ None of my sentences are unnecessarily wordy.

☐ My overall tone is formal. It never sounds like I’m having a chat with my reader.

APA

☐ My document is formatted in APA style with 1-inch margins, Times New Roman 12-point font,

double spacing, page numbering, a title page, and indented paragraphs.

☐ My references are on a separate page at the end of my document.

☐ My references are listed in alphabetical order.

☐ I include a reference entry for every single source that I cite in my paper.

☐ Every single source that is in my references is cited at least once in my paper.

☐ My references are formatted in correct APA style.

☐ All of my quoted sentences include a citation, and all my citations for quotes include the following:

o Author(s) or organization name if no author is available

o Year or n.d. if no date is available

o Page number or paragraph number if no page numbers are available

☐ All of my paraphrases include a citation, and all my citations for paraphrases include the following:

o Author(s) or organization name if no author is available

o Year or n.d. if no date is available

Grammar & Mechanics

☐ My paper does not contain any fragments (incomplete sentences), run-on sentences, or

awkward/confusing sentence constructions.

☐ My paper does not contain any capitalization errors.

☐ My paper does not contain any spelling errors.

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