I need help with redoing this assignment. I have attached the assignment itself and along the brainstorming that was to support the assignment. My instructor feedback “Your topic and title don’t mesh together. You should have more references Your hook does not connect with your essay title. Your mapped thesis doesn’t follow your introduction. This paper does not have a focus to it. I also have attached a blank assignment sheet
Stress happens. It’s the tax we pay for being alive, busy, and surrounded by people who chew too loudly. Since we can’t avoid it entirely, the next best thing is to pay attention to what actually sets
Stress happens. It’s the tax we pay for being alive, busy, and surrounded by people who chew too loudly. Since we can’t avoid it entirely, the next best thing is to pay attention to what actually sets it off and how we react. This assignment is basically a data collection mission: